Task:
Write a PEEL paragraph responding to this statement
Rimu is the best syndicate at TIS.
You must:
Decide on your umbrella Point
Give at least 3 Explain reasons, each with an specific Example
Finish with a Linking sentence back to your P statement.
Use sequencing words for your reasons
Rimu is the best syndicate at TIS because they work as a team. Firstly, they cheer the team on and they celebrate when a teammate does a good job. However when a teammate fails they say "Nice try," and get them back to their feet. Secondly, they shout their chant together to spread their success and to grab students into their house. They do this by, walking into other houses or they stand in assembly and they shout their voices out. Thirdly, they work academically together to reach the success criteria. They do this by, sharing ideas and discussing whether it is right or wrong and going through the instructions so they would understand together. Also when someones lost in their work they work with the student to get them on track. Therefore that is why Rimu is the best syndicate in TIS.
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